This is a minor thing, but I noticed that Lena still shows up in her bed in the morning on the 2nd day onward but her sprite is also in the shower, allowing you to view the new scene. After the shower scene, her sprite stays in the bed while her sprite is in the middle of her room until you advance time.
Not a problem. I'm actually surprised at the quick response. I also noticed a few grammar problems, mostly a few misspelled words, in the shower scene...although to be honest I didn't notice them until the second time in the shower when I was confirming the sprite issue.
Just before the first abort/stay choice, Mike says 'noticed' instead of 'notice'. Just after Lena starts taking off her pants Mike says he would 'slapp that ass' rather than 'slap that ass'. After the shower warms up, Lena says 'carassing myself I probably gonna get him to join me' instead of 'caressing myself I'm probably gonna get him to join me'. Immediately after that Mike asks 'Did she noticed me' rather than 'Did she notice me'. Those were the ones I noticed, and there might have been others I didn't spot. Hope the feedback helps!
thanks again, that really helped! :D English is not my first language so these things can happen :P I try to get the obvious wrong spelled words at my best but small things like the ones you mentioned tend to slip my eagle eye ^^
As development continues, I can point out things like that as I notice them for you with the public release in order to give what help I can since I can't afford patreon. And honestly, even people that have English as a first language can make those exact same mistakes, so I definitely don't hold that against you. Keep up the good work!
sry, but I don't understand how advance in the story , just 2 scene all times the same ( bathroom and night) how you can reach other scene ?( english isn't my first language, sry)
This is a minor thing, but I noticed that Lena still shows up in her bed in the morning on the 2nd day onward but her sprite is also in the shower, allowing you to view the new scene. After the shower scene, her sprite stays in the bed while her sprite is in the middle of her room until you advance time.
ReplyDeleteyes, thank you a lot for pointing that out :)
DeleteI apparently messed up some "reset" scripts that put her "back" after the scenes
will of course get fixed for the next techDemo version
Not a problem. I'm actually surprised at the quick response. I also noticed a few grammar problems, mostly a few misspelled words, in the shower scene...although to be honest I didn't notice them until the second time in the shower when I was confirming the sprite issue.
Deletewould you mind listing the ones you found, please?
DeleteI already found some myself but maybe I missed some again :)
Just before the first abort/stay choice, Mike says 'noticed' instead of 'notice'.
ReplyDeleteJust after Lena starts taking off her pants Mike says he would 'slapp that ass' rather than 'slap that ass'.
After the shower warms up, Lena says 'carassing myself I probably gonna get him to join me' instead of 'caressing myself I'm probably gonna get him to join me'.
Immediately after that Mike asks 'Did she noticed me' rather than 'Did she notice me'.
Those were the ones I noticed, and there might have been others I didn't spot. Hope the feedback helps!
thanks again, that really helped! :D
DeleteEnglish is not my first language so these things can happen :P
I try to get the obvious wrong spelled words at my best but small things like the ones you mentioned tend to slip my eagle eye ^^
As development continues, I can point out things like that as I notice them for you with the public release in order to give what help I can since I can't afford patreon. And honestly, even people that have English as a first language can make those exact same mistakes, so I definitely don't hold that against you. Keep up the good work!
Deletesry, but I don't understand how advance in the story , just 2 scene all times the same ( bathroom and night) how you can reach other scene ?( english isn't my first language, sry)
ReplyDelete0.4 only has two scenes ;)
Deleteoh ok ok thanks for answer ^^ .
Deletegreat job btw